Wonderful Writing

Check here for examples of our wonderful writing that we have completed in class or for homework! Tell us what you think!

Room 8 members give feedback to your classmates telling them how they are getting on and what they could do to improve!

As part of own learning about the Olympic Games, we have been using Thinkers Keys to develop our ideas and writing. The key we used this week was the ridiculous key. We had to think of reasons why we shold NOT play sport!

Why you shouldn’t play sport! You might get hurt or you might end up in hospital. This is bad because you can miss stuff you and something might go wrong. You could miss sports and other things.

Mackenzie

26.6.12

Why you shouldn’t play sport!

I think you should not play sport because you might break a bone and really hurt your self badly.
You could break your arm, leg, neck, knee and your head too of course. You could miss lots of important games and you would let your team down. All of your training has not paid off.
You will miss parties, sleep over, school and games. We should not have sports if it is muddy outside. Mostly at rugby and at grassy places.

Holly

26.6.12

Why we shouldn’t play sport! If you participate in sports you could get hurt like break one or two bones and you might have to go to hospital and your mum or dad will have to pay thousands of dollars. Also your mum or dad will have to be your slave and do your homework or do your sports your mum does not want to be your slave she has more important jobs to do like washing and make beds.

Lillie

26.6.12

Why you shouldn’t play sport!

We shouldn’t have sport because you might get hurt and you might break a bone, that would be BAD. It would cost money. Mum and Dad would be ANGRY at you. You shouldn’t do any sport for these reasons.

Dominick 

25.6. 12

Why you should not play sport! You should not play sport because if you are playing hooky someone might hit you and you might have to go to hospital and it will be lots of money and if you stay at home then your friends will have no one to play with and then they will be sad so that is why you should not play sport.

Georgia.
25.6.12

Why you shouldn’t play sport!

I think we shouldn’t play sport because you might get hurt. You might miss important games because you will be hurt. You will have to go to the hospital and get an x-ray because you might have some broken bones in your body and it would be hard to walk. I think we shouldn’t play rugby because you might get tackled and you will have to go to the hospital and get another x-ray because you could have some broken teeth and it would be in really bad pain because it will be cracked and you will have to get a filling.

Shialla

25.6.12

Why we shouldn’t play sport 

We shouldn’t play sport because you have to have a shower and then get dry and also you might get hurt. If this happens you can’t play anymore and you might miss important games or parties, sleepovers, or school. Also you might not like that sport anymore because you don’t like the people in your team and they might be mean to you. There might be something that you don’t like about that sport that makes you not want to play like tackling or running because people don’t have to like everything. That’s why I think we shouldn’t play sport.

Ella 

25.6.12

Why we should not play sport



I think you shouldn’t play sport because your team mates might abuse you. Also that would make you feel like your team mates don’t want you to play in the team. Also you might get hurt. If you get hurt you might miss the grand final or an important game. It wouldn’t be good be the best in the team so your team might come last in the championship. Also if you get hurt your Mum and Dad will have to pay so you can get better. They would have to pay because the workers at the hospital want to work and make you better.

Josh 
25.6.12


Why we should not play sport


I think people should not play sport because they might get sweaty and they will have to get in the shower after every match .They might get hurt might break a bone might and go to Hospital. You might miss the whole season if you’re sick for that long. You could also miss parties, sleepovers,work, school and much more.If you play Rugby League you might get tackled and get mud in your eye’s.If you play Hockey you might get hit in the head with the puck or ball Ouch!!!


Finlay
27.06.12

Why we should not play sports.

I think you should not play sports because you might get hurt.
For example, if you get hurt you will have to get taken to the hospital.
And your parents will have to pay a fortune to get any broken bones fixed.
Then you might even miss important games but or school but if you are an adult you might miss work.
Next, you might miss your family holidays and you will have to pay all your money to fix you instead.
Then I think you should not play sports because you might not know how to swim and you might drown.
Also you might twist your foot when you are running. 

Nadia
25.6.12


West Coast Wild Weather

 Today Mum woke me up and I got ready for school. Then I said to mum “The window sills are wet.” 

We put towels on the wet and dripping window sills.  I kept on drying them and then mum saw that the plant pot had blown over.  I hated the rain because it was heavy and bucketing down!  Also the wet water had nearly dripped off the window sill.  The hail was slamming on the window! I got ready and I ran to get my guitar because it was guitar day. So I ran out the door and sprinted to the car because it was pouring down.  When we got to school I ran into the hall and walked to the hooks where you put your bags and carefully put my bag on the hook and carried my guitar up to class then I got ready for the rest of my day.

Ella

6.6.12